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## The digital transformation wave
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During last years, many companies have started facing what
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In previous years, many companies have started facing what
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they call their “Digital Transformation”, to become omnichannel
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companies[^1]. They become heavy IT users and the key transformation
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steps usually are defined by
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developer.
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These teams usually develop custom software solutions and deployment
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recipes for their companies. For small, medium enterprises (SME) this
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recipes for their companies. For small, medium enterprises this
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could be useful and easy to manage. But, what happens when the company
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has several DevOps teams around the world? How can they ensure a maximum
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has several DevOps teams around the world? How can they ensure maximum
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code/knowledge reuse across the organization?
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We have seen companies facing the same problem with different solutions
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due to the lack of cross-organizational transparent and collaborative
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methodology.
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due to the lack of cross-organizational transparency and collaborative
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methodologies.
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## The world of silos
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Collaborative development in open source ecosystems has been used several
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times as an example of how these methodologies can break silos between
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companies that might be even market competitors. Those companies have
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been able to share knowledge and resources with a common goal . If competitors can
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collaborate to build technology in which their business rely on, why
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could not corporate business units do the same if they have corporate
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success as mission?
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companies that might even be market competitors. Those companies have
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been able to share knowledge and resources with a common goal. If competitors can
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collaborate to build technology their businesses rely on, why
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couldn't corporate business units do the same if they have corporate
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success as a mission?
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## The start-ups bubble
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The lack of effective and transparent communication channels and
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documented procedures, might make harder any new employee on-boarding
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documented procedures might make it harder for any new employee to on-board
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and to be engaged with the company.
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On the other hand, recently created companies have been born taking
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advantage of the existing IT solutions to provide omnichannel services.
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They are used to work under “DevOps culture” and it might be easier for
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them to adopt a common cross-organizational methodology that allow
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They are used to working under “DevOps culture” and it might be easier for
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them to adopt a common cross-organizational methodology that allows
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transparency and collaboration.
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## Disengagement at work
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These aspects are key for software developers motivation, since their tasks
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These aspects are key for software developers' motivation, since their tasks
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involve cognitive skills, decision-making, creativity, or higher-order thinking.
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[^1]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Omnichannel

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